The Enemy Is Real
Hey, interesting story. Sounds like a terrible world to live in.
Heads up, somewhere you have "hasn't" instead of "hadn't" I believe, but I can't find where it is again. It was in the first half or third. Hope you don't mind me mentioning it.
Damn, I proof read like three times, I may or may not correct it, I got a lot more writing to do.
Good luck with your writing.
Hey, interesting story. Sounds like a terrible world to live in.
Heads up, somewhere you have "hasn't" instead of "hadn't" I believe, but I can't find where it is again. It was in the first half or third. Hope you don't mind me mentioning it.
Damn, I proof read like three times, I may or may not correct it, I got a lot more writing to do.
Good luck with your writing.